ENGL 101 Lecture Notes - Lecture 6: Nios Embedded Processor

• School: University of Arizona
• Department: English Main
• Course: ENGL 101
• Professor: Lane Van Ham

Document Summary

In essay one, i have a lot of small errors throughout my paper that need to be fixed. Journal thing i revised was my introductory paragraph. In my paragraph, i wrote casa de los ni os is oriented around working with children while the primavera foundation focuses on helping families and other individuals, not just children. I kept repeating the word children in my sentence and i continue to repeat it through the entire paragraph. In order to fix this i will take the word out and try to rephrase the sentences, so there is no longer repetition with my word choice. Instead of explaining what i am talking about i use the word this and i am missing a few commas in the sentence. To fix the sentence i will rewrite it to explain what is being pointed out and fix the few punctuation issues.