CIM 206 Lecture 15: african education
19 May 2017
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Hello anthony provencio: you are having concerns on the instances of steering away from the thesis statement. Well, this should be an area of concern, but you should not find it as a big issue. This it is because an issue being focused on writing. This because the ideas are just placed in a way that does not show any carefulness . a thesis statement is the main entity that you should offer importance in your essay. The thesis statement should have been the lead in your having to put ideas in the paragraph, as it is a supporting paragraph. Instead of having to change the whole topic, it is better if you just did some correction, in manner that will show that you are in the right track. The paragraph is weak because it does not address any issues that are pertinent to what the paper is all about.
