WRD 104 Lecture 1: Peer Review #1

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I think that your thesis is clearly stated and is mainly about the fact that you are the youngest in the family and all the negative baggage it comes with being the youngest. Your main ideas were clear and easy to follow. They mainly talked about the imitations you were given as being the youngest and the the fact that you weren"t given any freedom with your brothers had all the freedom and privileges: critical thinking. I feel like the purpose of your essay was to inform others about the horrors of being the youngest in the family and give an outsider a different perspective on being the youngest child. You had more of an emotional appeal (pathos) which really drew me into your work and i found it relatable: commentary. As i read your essay i was never lost and i really liked the flow and layout.

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