Writing Application 5.1
Revise the following poorly written letter. Use block style ( every line starts at the left margin) and mixed punctuation. Arrange some of the information in a bulleted list. Remember that the following letter is poorly written. Improve it!
Current Date
Mr. Anthony Cejka, Manager
Meeting and Events Department
Wynn Las Vegas Resort
3131 Las Vegas Boulevard
Las Vegas, NV 89109
Dear Mr. Cejka:
My name is Skyla Fuentes, and I am the Corporate Travel Associate for Delray Medical. I have been given the task of finding a meeting place for the Delray Medical spring sales conference for our sales representatives. It's scheduled for next March-about March 20 through March 24.
Our planning committee plans to meet September 18, and we would appreciate your response before that. Here are some things we need to know. I am wondering wheter the Wynn has a banquet room that can seat 250 guests. We will also need four smaller meeting rooms. We would expect about 75 sales reps to attend each of the meetings in these rooms. Because we will have electornic presentations, we are concerned about computer facilities. We will also need to know about transportation to and from McCarran International Airport. Do you have it? Finally, what about special room rates for groups? At this time of year? Yes or no? We've heard rave reviews of your excellent facilities! Thanks in advance for any infor you can provide.
Sincerely,
Skyla Fuentes, Associate
Corporate Travel Department
* This is for Business English but there was not a section to check for this subject.
Writing Application 5.1
Revise the following poorly written letter. Use block style ( every line starts at the left margin) and mixed punctuation. Arrange some of the information in a bulleted list. Remember that the following letter is poorly written. Improve it!
Current Date
Mr. Anthony Cejka, Manager
Meeting and Events Department
Wynn Las Vegas Resort
3131 Las Vegas Boulevard
Las Vegas, NV 89109
Dear Mr. Cejka:
My name is Skyla Fuentes, and I am the Corporate Travel Associate for Delray Medical. I have been given the task of finding a meeting place for the Delray Medical spring sales conference for our sales representatives. It's scheduled for next March-about March 20 through March 24.
Our planning committee plans to meet September 18, and we would appreciate your response before that. Here are some things we need to know. I am wondering wheter the Wynn has a banquet room that can seat 250 guests. We will also need four smaller meeting rooms. We would expect about 75 sales reps to attend each of the meetings in these rooms. Because we will have electornic presentations, we are concerned about computer facilities. We will also need to know about transportation to and from McCarran International Airport. Do you have it? Finally, what about special room rates for groups? At this time of year? Yes or no? We've heard rave reviews of your excellent facilities! Thanks in advance for any infor you can provide.
Sincerely,
Skyla Fuentes, Associate
Corporate Travel Department
* This is for Business English but there was not a section to check for this subject.
