ENGLISH 3PT3 Lecture 15: Lecture Fifteen (Mar. 14.18)

• School: McMaster University
• Department: English
• Course: ENGLISH 3PT3
• Professor: Professor Blair Hurley

Document Summary

Time about this course and what you learned, etc. They are heavily weighted towards showing that show a character desiring something they want something, choose which. Too many monologues, focusing on philosophical, internal thoughts. You have to be consistent in your story. Past and present tenses show different parts of the story that the reader can see the characters traits. Even just little instances that demonstrate these traits. Tense we have to make a choice about which tense we use, and stick with it. Final story, a couple of homework"s expanded by one page, and a reflection. Where we can"t run away from the moment. Instead of telling us the character is a certain way you show us a scene. It should show a character"s desires could be tedious scenes, but choose scenes moment is the most important of the characters life capture this with real time.