GLOBALZN 1A03 Lecture Notes - Lecture 3: Business Travel
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My first suggestion is to change the subject name on the memorandum page. After that, i would change the first paragraph. The intro sentence you suspicions were right will be deleted. Our unwritten policy has been anything goes", leaving us will be deleted and the rest. We are spending far too much on business travel with no real control over t&e expenses. of the sentence will be merged with the previous sentence: Since recommendations are not to be included, the following paragraph will be deleted. differently. The third paragraph in the memorandum should be a bit changed. The second sentence starting i"ve found that does not fit in to the informative report. Also, the recommendations in the third paragraph like we"ll need a lot of top management will not be included in the informational report. Subject: an analysis on electrovision"s travel and entertainment costs. Here is the report you requested january 28 on electrovision"s travel and entertainment.