INI300H1 Lecture 6: INI300 L6(b)
20 Jan 2016
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Unclear: he was not unhappy about not failing to meet the criteria. Better: he was pleased he met the criteria. -confusing sentence: the recycling facility, although it was originally intended for use by only one municipality, is now shed with night outing townships. Number: do not switch from singular to plural when referencing something. Women have made considerable strides in their chosen fields. You is a good pronoun in cover letter, memo. But is it is not a good choice for report. -verb tense: show time changes only when logic requires. When the ceo entered the auditorium, the crowd applauded. -unbalanced: we anticipate expansion into underserved regions, border areas, and markets that are located overseas. -parallel: we anticipate expansion into underserved regions, border areas, and overseas markets. Comparison a has to be exactly the same as comparison b.
