CRIM 2650 Lecture Notes - Lecture 5: Fermi Gamma-Ray Space Telescope, The Astrophysical Journal, American Astronomical Society
25 Mar 2015
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The attached manuscript has been submitted for possible inclusion in the science section of. The science editor, jane davenport, tells you that, besides being too long, the article is pitched at much too high a level for the general audience served by the star. Follow the author letter template to communicate with the authors, explaining the changes you have made to the article. Your objective is to receive their approval for the revised article to be printed, so you will need to be persuasive. Substantive edit (10%: thesis statement - 2, substantive (structural + stylistic) editing for audience 8. Author letter (10%) rubric posted online; 3 pages max. double-spaced. Submit: edited article with thesis statement, tracked changes with comments; a clean final edited version of the article; author letter. The inner milky way is home to a massive black hole (mbh), surrounded by clusters of young stars and giant molecular clouds.
