UWP 1 Lecture Notes - Lecture 2: Passive Smoking, Thesis Statement, Lord Voldemort
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Briefly explain why each revision is a better thesis statement (for a paper 6-8 pages in length) than its original. What"s worse, people who inhale secondhand smoke are taking these risks without their consent. Americans and provides a reason as to why fast food should be avoided: original: china"s one-child policy should be reversed. , revision: china"s one-child policy was intended to help control population growth. Instead, it has led to unintended and negative consequences, such as a diminishing labor force, an aging population, the neglect of basic human rights, and an unbalanced gender population. To alleviate this, lenders should be required to forgive student loans in cases where students are unable to repay their debts. County nuclear power plant should be closed. : the revision is more specified to which nuclear power plant plant the author is talking about and provides a reason. I started out writing very general and vague thesis statements, thinking that"s all that was needed.
