MMW 11 Lecture 6: 1E Jacob

• School: UCSD
• Department: Making of the Modern World
• Course: MMW 11
• Professor: Page Dubois

Document Summary

In the summary and synthesis paragraphs, jacob precisely and effectively summarizes the central points of both articles, especially the first one did you hear. The one about the philosopher writing a book on humour , in a logic way. Corresponding to the article, he writes about the different types of humour, fundamental elements of humour and the significance of humour. Jacob also utilizes different signal phrases and strong dictions, such as to elaborate, according to, he mentions/talks/explains . , which is then followed by examples or explanation that support each argument point he summarizes. In the first paragraph, i personally think that jacob should use more evidence to support the argument points, especially paraphrase the examples more. If i were asked to rate the citation, i would give a one. Though jacob cites correctly and summarizes completely, more value and comments should be add to the evidence.