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Part 3 of this Persuasive Essay writing practice will focus on Steps *3, *4, & *5 below:
Persuasive Essay Part 3
Student Resource
Writing a Persuasive Essay- Part 3 [Steps 3-5: Revise, Edit, Publish]
Assignment:
Revise/Edit and Publish/Present your Persuasive
Essay.
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Step 3) Revise
* Use appropriate transitions to help your readers
understand the connections between counterargument,
argument, and support. (See underlined transitions in
Sample below.)
* The conclusion, besides relating to the thesis and tying the supporting points together, should make a provocative final statement (see sample conclusion below).
Step 4) Edit
* Having correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar is important. Take time to read your essay through carefully, correcting any mistakes.
Step 5) Publish/Present
* Print or present your essay.
SAMPLE: Transitions, Conclusion - final statement
* Supporting paragraph #1 - Putting in place a global plan to control space debris may seem unnecessary to some since the chance of impact is very small, according to the Johnson Space Center, which gave an only 1 in 10,000 risk to humans. [Reference] However, these statistics don't reflect the increase in space debris each year nor the increasing number of maneuvers necessary to protect manned spacecraft like the International Space Station from debilitating and, thereby, possibly life-threatening collisions with space junk. This is borne out by NASA scientist Nicholas Johnson, who confirmed that ... [Give details and references.]
* Conclusion - Although the chance of humans being hit or satellites being damaged by space debris is small at this time and the cost of eliminating and preventing debris would be substantial, the space debris problem is only going to grow. Space debris will become a material threat at some point in the not-too-distant future. We need to put in place a global plan to manage our space debris - both the existing and the potential. Or we could ignore the warnings like Chicken Little's friends and just "let the sky fall."
