HUMAN 1HU3 Lecture 4: Lecture 4 - Feedback
17 Apr 2021
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Feedback: the dialogue between people which reflects back how you - or your work - is seen from another person"s perspective. Edit: proofreading: correct spelling, punctuation, fact-checking, indenting paragraphs, Revision: means re-seeing - comprehensive changes - reorganization, restructuring, etc. adding or removing content, settling potential inconsistencies, etc. Add we don"t always think about what the reader knows whens when writing first drafts; revising helps us identify where we need to add appropriate sentences, paragraphs or pages. In revising we need to cut material that might relate to the thesis but does not contribute to the essay - or is repetitive. Test read the draft and note progression/flow of paragraphs and points: look for places to clarify connections or ideas to help your reader understand. Establish the positive intent behind your feedback by identifying the strengths of the. Think about the type and tone of feedback you would like to recieve. Keep your personal perspectives/opinions out of it.
