ENGB04H3 Chapter Notes - Chapter W9: Chimney Sweep, James Basire, Bunhill Fields
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Don"t use passive: it can be noted that. What is the subject in the sentence. There is no subject not very grammatically correct. Take responsibility for your own opinion and voice. Passive voice has lack of confidence no responsibility for what you write. Thames is a river should be free flowing. On the map, being mapped: mark. Marking down, taking notes, spatial and precise. Seeing a mark tears marks contours on the face, wrinkles. Is he also marking the faces themselves is he contributing to those marks. The speaker wanders through the streets of london and comments on his observations. He sees despair in the faces of the people he meets and hears fear and repression in their voices. The woeful cry of the chimney-sweeper stands as a chastisement to the church, and the blood of a soldier stains the outer walls of the monarch"s residence.
