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29 Mar 2022

Can you please fix it the bottom writing is what I have to do and the first one is the one I wrote could please do it thank you

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Francisco

Francisco is a young boy who started school in the US. It was hard for him because he didn't speak English but he made a friend named Miguelito that soon disappeared. "I got my hat on and walked out the door, hoping to meet Miguelito so we could walk to school together." Francisco hadn't heard anything and didn't know where his friend had gone. "When I returned home from school this afternoon, I went to see if he was waiting for me by the creek. He was not there either." Francisco had lost the only friend he had and was upset about it because he didn't think he would find anyone else that speaks the same language as him so it made him want to study English more.

 

You were required to write a paragraph with three main ideas which were three characteristics of Francisco, supporting quotes with page numbers, and their explanations. However, you wrote a very different paragraph.